tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post5098325274150541250..comments2024-02-27T14:45:04.990+05:30Comments on Transition: Chapter-1: Devil’s filthVishal Kansagrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-89842878347940068822011-12-28T11:17:28.835+05:302011-12-28T11:17:28.835+05:30Thank you Pinakin,
I have started a dedicated blo...Thank you Pinakin,<br /><br />I have started a dedicated blog for this novel. It can be found here. http://frustrated-fuse.blogspot.com/2011/12/frustrated-fuse.htmlVishal Kansagrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-33054256258910502602011-12-25T01:57:59.811+05:302011-12-25T01:57:59.811+05:30realy nice starting..its like warming up..makeing ...realy nice starting..its like warming up..makeing way for the lead to come..<br />its like i m watching holywood movie...Pinakinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09186953353341997686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-61091329527706722702011-07-22T12:15:29.314+05:302011-07-22T12:15:29.314+05:30Good Work Vishal..Finally i read it..Though i dun ...Good Work Vishal..Finally i read it..Though i dun like reading novels but ur story theme creates an interest..Keep it up..Chandnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10591839647487552936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-87211386676774695562011-07-22T10:03:36.010+05:302011-07-22T10:03:36.010+05:30Superb!!!!
i felt like the whole chapter was play...Superb!!!!<br /><br />i felt like the whole chapter was played on TV screen.<br /><br />Keep writing:)Bhushanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051724454222915557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-47940440714410473192011-07-21T18:01:29.620+05:302011-07-21T18:01:29.620+05:30A promising plot indeed. I don't ever give a d...A promising plot indeed. I don't ever give a darn to english grammar et al as long as the language makes for a lucid reading. I'd love to see the language getting richer and richer as you progress with your novel. I believe the real hero in a novel is the story, story-telling comes next. You've got the heart of the novel in place, so will wait for upcoming chapters. Best of luck!tejas_shethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664675088240814640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-3797719851135678792011-07-21T15:44:41.330+05:302011-07-21T15:44:41.330+05:30Bhumikaji, till date I was too lazy and confused d...Bhumikaji, till date I was too lazy and confused due to certain reasons. But now I am back and there will be lots of bangs. :DVishal Kansagrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-84462619254307743762011-07-21T14:51:36.544+05:302011-07-21T14:51:36.544+05:30@vishal
it was really interesting!
and i wonder...@vishal <br />it was really interesting! <br /><br />and i wonder what u had been doing till date?<br /><br />loved it!bhumikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05299675026010907000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-17847726630114899362011-07-21T08:19:40.136+05:302011-07-21T08:19:40.136+05:30hai .
I am a regular luker on BR and just love tho...hai .<br />I am a regular luker on BR and just love those war sanarieos.<br />And your this story build up is sure a hair rising and memorable experience, as the anticipation of next instalment is again to get that thrill again.<br />Good writing keep it up.<br />.<br />Request-- please suggest link where i can read such war sanarios. Thanks.praveennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-20757203263334260872011-07-21T01:44:19.694+05:302011-07-21T01:44:19.694+05:30Thank you all for your feedback and support. Will ...Thank you all for your feedback and support. Will try to stand true to it and churn out good stuff. Love you all.Vishal Kansagrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-26511221636826239242011-07-21T00:42:50.686+05:302011-07-21T00:42:50.686+05:30Bxxxdy Hxxl, that's absorbing stuff! Well done...Bxxxdy Hxxl, that's absorbing stuff! Well done, Gypsy. Cannot wait to see the next chapter.Capt. Narendrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16056765186542285536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-81356198623795234082011-07-20T19:32:18.956+05:302011-07-20T19:32:18.956+05:30Interesting story so far. Can't wait to read ...Interesting story so far. Can't wait to read on. If you'd like, you can send it to us to edit.Roopanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-81898224244926137072011-07-20T17:25:15.816+05:302011-07-20T17:25:15.816+05:30Maybe you can rewrite paragraph 3 and 4. Rest is g...Maybe you can rewrite paragraph 3 and 4. Rest is good.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /> <a href="http://www.vcq.biz/" rel="nofollow">wallpapers</a>, <a href="http://www.utorrent.name/" rel="nofollow">utorrent</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-85901961300330493462011-07-20T17:02:30.719+05:302011-07-20T17:02:30.719+05:30Sure. This was written on he fly. I am not very go...Sure. This was written on he fly. I am not very good with English. But will try to improve. Thanks for the feedback.Vishal Kansagrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-62665109507384556552011-07-20T16:42:40.778+05:302011-07-20T16:42:40.778+05:30Good job. Grammatical errors need to be corrected ...Good job. Grammatical errors need to be corrected though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-6691865853644950612011-07-20T15:42:38.088+05:302011-07-20T15:42:38.088+05:30Thank you buddy. I am working on the next part. I ...Thank you buddy. I am working on the next part. I haven't even introduced the central character yet. ;)Vishal Kansagrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667534245482730301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-889346968303340197.post-39210756396256489242011-07-20T15:29:22.190+05:302011-07-20T15:29:22.190+05:30WILL SURELY WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.. IT GOOD GOING...WILL SURELY WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.. IT GOOD GOING KANSA ...Sherin Josephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326357521245276361noreply@blogger.com